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eclipse
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love drips from her as she leaves.
It moistens her fingers,
stains her white lace,
clings her blouse to her breast.
I lay here watching the light
set her hair into golden neon
as she closes the door. Eclipse.
Darkness surrounds me, cuddles.
Lies down with me on wet sheets.
Spent, empty, loveless, alone.
Copyright ©
darkeyedman
... [
2002-10-31 17:00:00]
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Re: eclipse
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by Kiz on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:05:47 AM AEST
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| Pretty cool...if u like that sorta thing. Thanx for sharing...brilliant poem. x |
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Re: eclipse
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:43:16 AM AEST
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Very nice poem. Well written.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: eclipse
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:16:22 PM AEST
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This was really pretty, i love your description of the girl.
Jane xxx |
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