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Finality

Contributed by skyblumoon on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:33:33 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You say freedom is what you need...
But then why bother to plant the love seed?

You said you wanted something more...
As you selfishly walked out the door...

My mind told you to go away...
As my heart begged you to stay...

My soul you buried in a grave...
My heart you hid in a cave...

Whatever we may have had...
Just like sour milk it went bad...

So the next time I think I'm in love...
I'll stand on a rooftop, & please just give me a shove...




Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-08-12 11:33:33]
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Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:53:22 AM AEST
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im really feeling what youre saying here cos the same things just happened to me. im sorry, i hope things get better, youve just got to learn that not all boys are the same i spose, though i know its very hard to believe. good write. xxx


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:32:22 PM AEST
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Awesome write. It's kinda crazy what love makes you feel. I mean Love is suppose to make you happy right. All it ever did was depress me so go figure. Now the only reason I have for living is my very wonderful very beautiful son. I thank God for him ever day. He Is my everything.
~Amy


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:17:06 AM AEST
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That is really sad. I haven't read any of your poems in a while so I thought I would check this one out.. Good write.


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:42:49 PM AEST
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Nice write.


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:47:14 AM AEST
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Interesting write. Sounds like a common problem, but you've handled it with originality. The sarcasm at the end works well.
Stitch


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:03:35 PM AEST
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Goodness me. Where we having a bad a hair day? This is really good. Sorry your heart is broken.
Izzy


Re: Finality (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:42:06 AM AEST
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Awesome write... Blu... I too like the sarcasm at the end...
~Donna~




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