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Today is the day!
Contributed by
Lucky1388
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:14:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Today is the day i say goodbye to all of my friends and those in my life,
All my problems will soon be over,
Soon i'll be on the floor with blood all over,
I'm walking to the kitchen looking for a knife,
remembering all the things that affected my life,
I'm walking to my room now sitting on my bed,
What should i cut my wrist or my head?
Either one is good i'll finally be gone for good.
Never forget TODAY IS THE DAY I SAY GOOD BYE!!
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Lucky1388
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2004-08-12 11:14:02]
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Re: Today is the day!
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by LyssaBella on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:26:24 AM AEST
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Darling...
Please tell me this is not true??? Please think before you hurt yourself. Life is crazy and yes it can be depressing at times. But from what I have read in your other poem you are a teen and this is the most tumoltuous (sorry if I spelled it wrong) time in your life. Reach out to your family, and if you cant do that go to a school counselor. Talk to friends. Im sure your family loves you very much and would want to help you. Please Please reach out and get some help.
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Re: Today is the day!
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:27:59 AM AEST
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All my problems will soon be over,
Soon I'll be on the floor with blood all over,
I'm walking to the kitchen looking for a knife,
remembering all the things that affected my life
I'm walking to my room now, sitting on my bed
What should I cut my wrist or my head?
Either one is good
I'll finally be gone for good.
Never forget TODAY IS THE DAY I SAY
GOODBYE!!
I've cleaned up some of your punctuation and capitalization, but you could avoid repeating words.
Stitch
(who is praying for you)
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Re: Today is the day!
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by skyblumoon on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:39:09 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem. |
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