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Forever Hopelessly Lost
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:32:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm never finding,
Still always reaching,
Never following,
But always preaching.
I need something
That no one holds,
I need to hear secrets
That are never told.
I can't find the key
To that padlocked door,
What am I missing?
I need something more.
Something is missing,
I just have that feeling.
I'm hurt so bad,
But I'm not healing.
Is it my fault?
Is it something I did?
Is there a light
That someone has hid?
Helplessly I lay here
Sobbing on the floor,
I don't even know
What I've been looking for.
Everything is just a dream
I am in a daze.
I just can't seem to find my way
Through this pitch black maze.
I cry out for help,
No one hears my call.
I start to stumble,
Nothing breaks my fall.
Just when I think
I've found my way
I hear a voice
That seems to say,
"As constant as the waves
Of the sea are tossed,
You will no doubt
Be hopelessy lost."
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by inoc on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:44:19 AM AEST
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bravo
brilliant[clap clap]
standing now out my chair
[clap clap clap]
pop goes the cork!!!.....bubbles....
I loved it.....
I'm glad you released those feelings! |
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by pixie on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:04:14 AM AEST
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Awww this is a very heart wrenching write, *hugs* you will be found one day of that I can asure you,
takecare
pixie xx
great write and flow btw.. |
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by WoodyMc44 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:12:38 AM AEST
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| Wow, how true is this most of the time, I truly enjoyed this - thanks |
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by Solnubis on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:25:11 AM AEST
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| Wow I can relate to this poem, and I can feel the hopelessness and I can hear the struggle within you. This was beautifully written. i wish I could write like this. |
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by Kie on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:17:59 PM AEST
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This is excellent to read. Yet sad enough to twist the heart strings. You express yourself very well.
KIe |
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Re: Forever Hopelessly Lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:37:55 PM AEST
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Jenna, just keep walking forward, sweetie. God is with you and will show you what you need to know. Be brave and strong and just continue doing what you know it right. Life will back around to normal. Rita
"To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe."
- Anatole France
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