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Call of a Friend
Contributed by
cj_ranson
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:36:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I am broken
You told me you cared
But not a moment was spared
Well what do I do
Listen to you??
I hope to God you are not lying
Coz I am really trying
I'll be your friend
Until the end
Just don't make me hurt
Don't leave me in the dirt
Because you really did mean heaps to me
And I hope you do see
I was crying when you were
I just couldn't admit it
I thought I'd lost a friend
So please let's work this out
I can't do anymore
My mind is feeling so sore
If you were a friend you'd help me too
So please come back
Please
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2004-08-12 04:36:32]
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Re: Call of a Friend
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:14:00 AM AEST
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great write. Lots of feeling, ur getting heaps better.
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Re: Call of a Friend
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by Row on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:55:47 AM AEST
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| good work sean, its good that uve worked it out now |
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