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She Alone
Contributed by
Rylo
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:41:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Body dressed in black,
And lips dressed in red.
She alone walks with the dead,
And never looks back.
Stealing the innocents of man.
She alone walks this land.
With her hair blowing in the wind,
And flaunting a seductive grin.
She plays a game, most certain to win.
Mother to all, who are damned,
She’ll take your life, with one touch of the hand.
Lifting your soul up high,
Into the darkest, of darkest skies,
And filling your head with darkened lies.
Green eyes are filled to a crimson red,
As she brings more souls, into the land of the dead.
Filling ones world with darkened dreams,
As they let out a crimson scream.
Body dressed in black,
And lips dressed in red.
She alone walks with the dead,
And never looks back.
2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-08-12 01:41:51]
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Re: She Alone
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:49:11 AM AEST
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steamy and spooky and mmmm I like it! Thanks U
Mistress Michelle
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Re: She Alone
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:41:38 AM AEST
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| This was very seductive and creepy....excellent. and gee, i wonder who could possibly be your mistress?? |
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Re: She Alone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:56:03 AM AEST
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Thy mistress, seems so enticing, but isnt that what you were trying to portray, with such seductive poem.
Masterfully written, Keep it up. |
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Re: She Alone
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:54:31 PM AEST
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Again another wonderfully written dark poem.
I really love reading this stuff awsome. |
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Re: She Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:47:47 PM AEST
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| i thought i was doing pretty well hiding my secrets, apparantly not...::wide eyes:: im in a really sarcastic/joking mood right now by the way =] this was an exceptional piece of art. |
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