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Heaven Awaits Us
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:22:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Memories are wonderful
always in your head
The time you spent together
no matter where it led
The campatability was awesome
the mere touch of each others hand
You thought you were in heaven
not hard to understand
You dream of a reunion
to be together once again
Time cannot pass fast enough
no matter where or when
We do know, Heaven Awaits Us
on that special day
How desperately we both try
to somehow find a way
To add more wonderful memories
into our mind's book
To hold each other in our arms
not only by just a look
Copyright ©
Bruce
... [
2004-08-12 01:22:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:44:26 AM AEST (User
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Heavenly beautifull.
good luck.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rylo on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:18:28 AM AEST (User
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This was a really good poem, great job. |
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:38:17 AM AEST (User
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Very wonderful thoughts.
And well-expressed too. |
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:59:24 AM AEST (User
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this is just precious, a beautiful write Bruce,
pixie xx
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:31:10 AM AEST (User
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"To add more wonderful memories
into our mind's book"
I love this line...beautiful verse.
WinterFawn
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:16:49 PM AEST (User
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Heaven Awaits Us
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stew on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST (User
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this is another beautiful one, bruce. i just love all of your poems. they have a special touch, which, of course, comes from your heart.
love forever
stew |
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