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A Childs Nightmare
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:25:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The Shadow of evil Strikes again,
With out a trace.
The sick game he plays,
A child’s nightmare
After we’ll never forget.
The evil shadow moves in the dark.
Leaving a mark,
The devil’s playing game
Indent die with it crosses it’s path
The shadow of Evil strikes 13
The game he plays
A Children’s Nightmare
The fear of when the Shadow will strike again
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pyrofairyburning
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2004-08-12 00:25:29]
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Re: A Childs Nightmare
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:37:27 AM AEST
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I'd say you captured a childs fear very well.
Good work.
huggs, luv,
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Re: A Childs Nightmare
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:17:39 AM AEST
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| Nasty nightmare for a child, The child will never want to sleep again, Nicely written in a dark sorta way, keep it up. |
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Re: A Childs Nightmare
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by Shnyzz on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:50:03 PM AEST
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| sponatanious randomness....hmmm |
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