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One Fine Day
Contributed by
Stellar
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:47:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When you look at me
What is it that you see
Do you see a girl
Whose life is better than you know
Do you think I am strong
And I know where I belong
Do you think I have my life under control
How can I tell you
About all of my pain
That I never see the sunshine
And I only feel the rain
That I never have known love
And my soul is empty too
How can I explain
The way I feel to you
Trust is a word
I don't understand
Searching through the darkness
I reach out my hand
I think I might be reaching
Until the day I die
At once I fall to my knees
And I begin to cry.
Suddenly a light
Comes shining from above
The rays of God fall down
Carrying all his love
I can see the Angels now
As they lift me to my feet
They say my life has just begun
And my depression I will beat
I close my eyes
And bow my head
I hear the words the Angels said
I thank the Lord
As I begin to pray
Knowing I'll find happiness
One fine day
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Stellar
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2004-08-11 23:47:52]
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Re: One Fine Day
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:06:51 AM AEST
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first welcome to our global family here.
wow!
You've found your calling 'cause i'm still tingling from reading this first write, powerfull, awesome, masterpeice.
Let it flow, let it flow!
I've been writing lyrics-n-poetry 25 years and it takes much to get my attention.
More, please?
luv, huggs, welcome to your calling,
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Re: One Fine Day
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:41:41 AM AEST
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Very well-written.
Keep writing... |
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Re: One Fine Day
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by Shnyzz on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:49:39 PM AEST
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| dont stop |
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