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Black and White
Contributed by
ell_03
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As the rain pours down
Onto me
I shiver and frown
At what I see
A lonely man
On the street
And though they can
They do nothing to help him to his feet
The people who
Think that their too good
To help someone like you
Help out a black they never would
Whats so wrong with black
They've done nothing wrong
But a heart whites lacked
For ever too long
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ell_03
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2004-08-11 22:12:06]
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Re: Black and White
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:29:27 AM AEST
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Very good for your age, indeed.
The whites before i'd say yeah, they needed a heart or some of them was lacking much in compassion.
I'm part Native born Indian with other nationalities mixed.
I'm not prjudiced against any nationality.
Keep writing as u r good!
luv, huggs, smiles, peace,
emy |
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Re: Black and White
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by maryetta on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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poetry come from the heart, and i find compassion comes after the word poet, you are a natural born poet, welcome to our world, continue writing what your heart feels.
(((HUGS)))
maryetta
ps your words are very good |
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