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Black Hearted Blues
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:24:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Black hearted blues
The kind that mixes different hues
Different colors of the day
Never seem to be painted my way
My day trudges by ever so slow
But on my face sorrow never shows
I put on a smile and seem to not care
But Id just rather not be there
People and friends always arround
But for me never a soul to be found
Paint me a picture, one of my life
Paint me a picture without grief or strife
Why does this painter paint in black
Color is one thing this picture lacks
Bring into my heart a rainbow of colors
Fill my heart with happyness of others
With all this black inside of me
Who can I turn to that will possibly see
They will see the softer side of me
The side I wish everyone could see
Oh play me a song to make me dance
Make my heart fill with romance
Oh play me a soothing tune
One to make me forget of you
Sing me a song that brings a smile
A smile that been overdue for a while
A smile not only placed upon my face
A smile deep inside my hearts' empty space
Oh help me please
Can you see the blue in the black
Oh help me please
Can you help me get back on track
Darkness hides behind this false curtain of joy
Everyone neglects the fact of this ploy
They choose not to actually see
That this smile is not really a part of me
Why cant I be as happy as I look
Why cant you see what you took
My black hearted blues
Full of the black hearted tunes
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-08-11 19:24:08]
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Re: Black Hearted Blues
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:34:25 PM AEST
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| omg...that poem was amazing, very emotional and easy to read. I loved every minute of reading it. Great write! Hopefully someone will come and fill in that black hole...I can relate to this poem very much. It sounds alot like lyrics. fantastic write. |
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Re: Black Hearted Blues
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:49:19 PM AEST
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| amazing!!! that is right up on the list of best poems i've ever read...seriously.... thank you so much for posting this..i relate to this so much.....it's the way i've been for as far back as i can remember.....and now it has even new meaning to go along with my new job as a cashier at wal mart....i hate customer service...and you hafta smile and be nice to EVERYONE!! lol...it's gonna take alot of getting used to....cuz......i mean..i like ppl....but....only the ones i chose to like.....i'm just not..a ppl person..and now i hafta work this job and put on this huge act.....it's not too hard since i've done it all my life..but i was just starting to get out of that stage...i was starting to state my own opinions and stuff..and i was starting to understand that it's ok to not be happy all the time....and then..i get this job....*makes angry face* lol...anyways this was a really really great write!!! |
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