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Contributed by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 06:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

burning up with so much anger
am i in terrible danger,i feel like
a stranger to my own neice

no one realizes me,no one ever
looks me right in the eyes,i've
heard too many lies,why won't
i just die,i feel like i'm on trial
everyone has a smile on their face

trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider

everyone tries to deny me,everyone
lies,and i know it,i need to go,get out
of here,i wanna go up there,it don't
matter if i end up down there,i just
don't wanna be here all alone

i need somone to come along
and tell me where i belong
this life is just too long,i feel
like i've already left with no one
realizing where i went not even
caring

outsider
outsider
ousider

trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider

life is tough enough,theres just too
much rough playing,i love one
person,he loves me and hes the
only one that seems to care,its
not fare but atleast its a mutual thing

outsider
outsider

playing in this crazy place,i'll never
forget that one face,is life a race?
it don't matter what i do,you always
have something to say that will bring
me down,and my father is never around

trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-08-11 18:43:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:28:20 PM AEST
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dont wory about it, i know what its like to be surrounded with no one there, you just have to hope for the better, nice write by the way also

L8r

Ninja Tycz

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