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A Dream
Contributed by
Stew
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Bright green grass with a creek running through.
Freshness of the morning.
Birds chirping sweetly.
Light breeze flowing over my body.
Dew in the wind.
This is all a dream.
Copyright ©
Stew
... [
2004-08-11 15:07:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:30:47 PM AEST (User
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aww how beautiful. id love a world like that too. so peaceful and amazing.
great write. imagery was stunning.
i loved this.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: A Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by PolaroidMemory on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:54:19 PM AEST (User
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I got a very vivid image from this poem. Great write and beautiful poem. -Megan- |
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