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Tear the Tear ( She sleeps again)
Contributed by
Daniella
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:02:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Tear the Tear that’s dancing
Dancing upon that sweetly flamed blue
A vitality unattainable
A sadness unimaginable
Compassed whole into a sharpened point upon your tongue
A Tear too young
Her timidity too white to fall so fast
An eternity
Until, until…
She sleeps again
Copyright ©
Daniella
... [
2004-08-11 15:02:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tear the Tear ( She sleeps again)
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST (User
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Good job on this..I liked it..
AfterDark.. |
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