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I Dont...
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Rip out my heart
Scratch at my wings
i dont want to feel
i dont want to breathe
Free me
Set me from this eternal death
Spark my soul
Set it to flame
Light a match
Watch me as i burn
You dont know how it feels
To die inside
to not care
not of anyone
Just to care only of the pain
the Pain
Oh dear bitter sweet
Juvenille Pain
to feel ones breath
catch in your throat
and feel your insides
Scortch and burn
When withholding
That final breath
no one knows
no one will care
You are alone
Alone as you have been
From start to finish
You have played this game
Far to long
time to cut the ties
no more strings attached
and follow your own will
To break the rules
of the game
i wont feel
i wont breathe
Ripped out my heart
Tore up my wings
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-08-11 14:58:29]
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Re: I Dont...
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:00:48 PM AEST
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0pps! sorry bout that, i made a mistake! SORRY! there was only supposed to be one poem! my bad..
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Re: I Dont...
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:34:54 PM AEST
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I dont know what you mean by there was only supposed to b one poem.;..but this is a good write....good job expressin your pain
Lots of Love
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Re: I Dont...
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by TwEeK on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:42:16 AM AEST
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i accedentally clicked on this poem twice, but i guess the computer deleted the other one, oh well, nevermind then!
:-P
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Re: I Dont...
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by PseudoSmile on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:50:26 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. =] |
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