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Rain
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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above everything
i hear it
the soft cry of wind blowing between the trees
watch them dance
apon sturdy branches
waltzing on the breath of life
as a deathly storm
slowly moves in
who gave the magnificent thunder his bad name
i embrace the storm
for it is my stirring soul
the wonders spread on us as the heavens open and tears are shed from the sky
i silently speak out
madman who i was
stand among the lightning and the earths essance as i cry
soaked to the skin
shivering up my spine
as i stand on the road and wait for the truck driver to inch closer
my soul set free
at the crack of lightning
once again set free amongst my element
never to die
as my soul live free
forever in the rain
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-08-11 14:43:18]
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Re: Rain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 04:04:37 PM AEST
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| this is so incredible and vivid...i saw everything and i swear i almost felt the rain...so beautiful...wow... |
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Re: Rain
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by dartsofplsre87 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:19:48 AM AEST
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| Really good poem. It is so deep and meaningful. |
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Re: Rain
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:13:39 AM AEST
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this poem is very powerful. i love the imagery and escriptive elements. beautiful write.
Brynna |
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