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Car Crash
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I remember it so clearly,
My eyesight was all bleary,
Awash with all the tears,
I had witnessed my biggest fear.
You lay there your body weak,
As you looked up & tried to speak,
Your face was not a pretty sight,
But I still held onto you so tight.
My walls had all come crashing down,
Death was present in a black gown,
He was trying to take you from me,
Please leave him here & let him be.
I begged, I pleaded & I wept,
But into you death slowly crept,
I cradled you in my arms,
But it was too late, I came after the harm.
Then I woke up with a start,
Feeling a stabbing pain in my heart,
Then I remembered my awful dream,
In my chest there was a fading scream.
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pixie
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2004-08-11 11:58:35]
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Re: Car Crash
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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A very vivid portrayal of your dream, so glad that it was just a dream. I believe we get those to remind us of how precious those we love truly are. A reminder to be sure we let them know it.
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Re: Car Crash
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by venkat on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:41:50 AM AEST
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| Aww..this is a chilling poem."death was present in a night gown"..hmm very vivid.. venkat |
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Re: Car Crash
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by CaddishCut on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:51:06 PM AEST
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| That's creepy, but it made great verse! |
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