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You Leave Me Breathless
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:52:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whenever our eyes lock in a stare,
I feel like you have laid me bare,
My body is forever & only yours,
I drink you into my very pores.
Your hands mould my nakedness,
As we embrace in a state of undress,
A touch of your hand makes me quiver,
Kissing your lips forces me to shiver.
As we unfurl into each other,
You feel so much more than a lover,
But like the other part of me,
My eyes are now open & I can see.
Your possess beauty inside & out,
I’ll love you eternally, no shadow of a doubt,
The way we love is unlike the norm,
In the bedroom we really cook up a storm.
What we share I will always treasure,
It will lay in my heart forever & ever,
I can’t quite catch my breath,
After you made me die a little death.
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pixie
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2004-08-11 11:52:24]
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Re: You Leave Me Breathless
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:00:59 PM AEST
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WooHoo Grrlfriend... Looks like someone is happy tonight!!!! I loved this sensual and beautiful write....
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Re: You Leave Me Breathless
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:11:11 AM AEST
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Very passinate poem. Great piece.
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Re: You Leave Me Breathless
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by venkat on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:34:41 AM AEST
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| Ooooh..very hot and sweet..hmm.. breath taking. venkat |
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