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Your New Friends
Contributed by
Justice3310
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I havent heard your voice for quite sometime,
I havent had to listen to your played out rhyme
Are your friends treatin you good s*** you dont care,
all you ever wanted was a man to be there
Stabbin anyone in the back that got in your way,
you treated guys they tehre were your prey
Show a little more skin, yea they like you now,
get on your knees for them take a little bow
Do what they say cuz you gotta fit in,
Oh dont eat that you gotta stay thin
Tears on your pillow feelin all alone,
not realizin how much your hatred has grown
Does he love you or just the cash you bring,
will you really ever see that diamond ring
You pushed me away the one who was always there,
you pushed me away the one you did nothin but care
This time I refuse Im not turnin back I have a daugther to raise,
you know in life we have choices so live through days
You got new friends now they'll stanb by your side,
ha,thats funny they'll be the first to hide
I took your pain I carried your tears,
I took the heartache for so many years
You dont need me around anymore right,
thats fine with me you arent worth the fight
Keep that powder in your nose yea that takes the hurt,
not knowin soon youll be surronded by dirt
Six feet under tryin to fit in tryin to be cool,
but all you look like is a burnout fool
Good luck my friend you dont need me anymore,
jsu remeber sweetheart you closed the door
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Justice3310
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2002-10-31 12:40:00]
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Re: Your New Friends
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:45:06 PM AEST
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Ouch, Ouch, Ouch
Terrific write!!!
I can relate to this alot
in my life right now
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Your New Friends
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 01:19:05 PM AEST
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| Wow Justice again a wonderful poem,but so touching!Sounds to me like instead of them not needing you,YOU don't need them as well! Good luck! Christina |
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Re: Your New Friends
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by horseluver on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:39:20 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem-I really loved it-nicely written-and you're right on in your last line-she closed the door-not you...though it's very painful to watch a close friend take the wrong path-sometimes you just have to move on -which you have done....good for you-stay strong! ~ For her own sake, I hope your friend wakes up and realizes her mistakes before she really gets hurt...XXOO ~ Jess |
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