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My friend the potato turned evil
Contributed by
aaaahhhh_potato
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:41:45 AM in AEST
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My potato used 2 b kind it used 2 b kool
but that soon finished that day after school.
it came in my room and hit me right in the face
i stared blankly back not saying a trace.
i didnt know it and it didnt know me
well thats wot i thought how wrong could i be
The potato hated me so very much
i thought it was english then it said it was dutch.
it lied to me so many times
so i hate it now
and nothing else rhymes.
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:58:59 AM AEST
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Well, *confused* It made me smile if nothing else, after finishing reading it.
'Crimes' rhymes with 'times' . . .
Just thought you mightn't have thought of that.
Keep writing, um . . . potato. |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:22:10 AM AEST
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*Laughs* Heh heh, i know someone who would love this. It has 'potato' in it.
Funny poem,
Phil xxx |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:10:55 AM AEST
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This is adorable. Can we call you 'Tater' for short? This is very unique.
Rita |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:00:31 PM AEST
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the title caught my attention I was born and raised in spud country (Idaho) and for fun we were always making poems and short stories about tato's this is toooooooo cute! Dont let that tato black your eyes or anything ok? HEEHEE
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:35:45 PM AEST
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The title got me too ... uh ... I'm thinking ... time for some FRENCH fries. LOL. Very cute, brought a smile. Thanks.
Naz ~ |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by HatingMalice on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:27:25 PM AEST
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| interesting yet quite sucky.. |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:01:01 PM AEST
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| lol.. so funny. everytime I look at a potato I will think of this poem.. AND lock my bedroom door at night. |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:27:46 AM AEST
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interesting write it was cool sorry i cant think of nothing else to so please read some of mine and comment on them
DEMON |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:30:28 PM AEST
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I loved it! This is mad, insane, in the best way possible. I died laughing like three times.
*Ponders on the thought that maybe it was written seriously*
This was a very good poem. I can see where the inner pain and struggles come from. Your archenemy the Potato must be subdued.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Shishke_Bob on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:02:06 PM AEST
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curses on the potato may they be boiled and mashed.
this was a very funny poem it made me laugh thank you. hope to read more from you. (If you are still here...Hello?)God bless
KaBob |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:30:36 AM AEST
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| Why would you write about a potato...I think maybe this one belongs under the drug abuse topic...how hard did that potato hit you anyway...? |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Somnium on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 04:43:23 AM AEST
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| When i read this i kind of got the feeling that you werent talkikng about a potato, using the slightly ridiculus as an image for someone you loved who hit you and hurt you. Like a parent or sibling. I dont know if im right but it sounded a lot like it. |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Harmony on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 05:33:50 AM AEST
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lol :D that made me laugh so much :D great :) take care :)
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by newtopoetry on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 09:04:59 PM AEST
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| hilarious so funny i laughed outloud |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Sheveg on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 11:48:29 AM AEST
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Being lied to sucks.
Sherry |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by Suzylnn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 04:11:33 PM AEST
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| Still laughing, loved it..so very cute! |
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Re: My friend the potato turned evil
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 11:05:24 AM AEST
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| I loved this it made me laugh so hard .....:D this is something that could be chosen to be put in a children's. Book of poetry :) keep on writing !I think it would be awesome yo find out where the pototo goes next :) |
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