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ashamed

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:04:48 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

rite there infront of me but never noticed
you were lying all along to me
but i could,nt take it
your lies have made me colder
a life with no apoligies has made me stronger
these lies you yourself will never fade away
and i swear ill try for you until my dying day

i try to pull you out of the mess you made
but you just would,nt see me
drowning in my own beautiful demise
watching you suffocate takes the heart of me
as you turn and walk away
i hear yu whisper to me
"i,ll never make it in this world on my own i,m so sorry"

torcher and pain with no one to blame but yourself
please won't you let me hold you tight
just one more time
watching you drown is ***** killing me
your touch so cold liek you have never known me
eyes full of nothingness you can't even look at me
ashamed cold and full of violent thoughts
your not the person i loved before

i hold out my hand bu you will not take it
you cannot bare to touch your own daughter one last time
you cannot bare that you were rong
and now you have lost it all

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-08-11 09:04:48]
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Re: ashamed (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:22:48 AM AEST
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Intensely written. Awesome write, getting your feelings down with words kind of helps with the struggle. Beautiful.

Kimberly

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