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To anyone who cared...

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 06:11:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



To anyone who cared,

This is it, my final goodbye, and please for me dont even cry. I hadn't been here long, but long enough, and trust me now i had it rough. I had my friends, but never knew, If anyone i could call true. I lived in the shadows, where nobody knows, lived alone where nobody goes. I prayed to God, but still no cure, I am not clean, I am not pure. You tried to save me, but i pushed you away, i became a mute with nothing to say. What ever the problem, it's always my fault, I filled my own wound with icy cold salt. I loved once in my life, but that ended in pain, and even in the sun, on me it still rains. He took out my heart and left me to die, told me he loved me, it all was a lie. Friends aren't friends, and I'm not me, just took me long to stand back and see. The world would be perfect, if only i'm gone, my beautiful skin is tardy and worn. Face filled with scars, a wrist full of cuts, too many questions with too many buts. The blood on the floor, will show what i lust, and in a blunt knife my life i would trust. Bloodstained walls and bloodstained doors, bloodstained sheets and bloodstained floors. Show where this little girl had been, show what this little girl had seen. I loved you all, my friends and foe, but my one desire is to go. I live for nothing, i grow but old, never wanted i was always told. You confirmed i'm not perfect, tainted and dirt, and to bring my end it wouldn't hurt. I cry with joy to see my end, to leave alone my phoney friend. Too live a lie would be worse than hell, I've been there and back and live to tell. I hold no grudge, I'm going to bliss, and I know you wont even miss. I'll see you one day. when your time has come, but now i know what has to be done. Take this as my kiss goodbye, and in the heavens i'll learn how to fly.

The broken girl
xoxoxoxoxo




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Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 06:26:32 AM AEST
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*hugs* I am really sorry that things have gotten so bad for you , a very deep and desperate write

pixie xx


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 06:38:37 AM AEST
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sad, but a great write. Loretta im always here, always.
I you ever need me i'm just a call away.

love always, dizza
xoxoxoxo


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 06:43:25 AM AEST
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this is from....
some one who cared BROKEN GIRL
you have talent in you and
once you realise that '''honestly
your rough times will be a shadow in your past....
xxoo

ps keep writing!


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:32:46 AM AEST
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A very Sad goodbye. Im really sorry that things aren't getting any better for you. There are people who care, alot of people. And we're right here. Anytime you need to talk, message me. Please take care....


Kimberly


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:35:02 PM AEST
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I am not ashamed to admit, that just put tears in the eyes of a 36yr old man. There is such hopless finality to those words.


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:39:52 PM AEST
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It hurt to read I could only imagine what it hurt to write. BE STRONG.

~HAKIOKUSAKEN~


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by dartsofplsre87 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:16:20 AM AEST
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I know how you felt. I used to be depressed and still am a little but i hope you get better like me. Great poem


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:39:16 AM AEST
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i know you wrote this a while back but please don't die!
i'm here!
... if you ever wanna talk.


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by amber1988 on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:45:13 AM AEST
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this is a sad but good write. i know how u feel. i used to b depressed and lived a life that i wanted to escape. ive thot about suicide but not anymore because it all worked out. hopefully it will for you too. just message me if u ever want or need to talk to sumone with experiance.


Re: To anyone who cared... (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:00:57 PM AEST
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this is a sad poem...nicely written but very sad. dont take your life away PEOPLE CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please listen to me... you're very talented ...you got a lot to live for




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