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It's all my fault
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 04:04:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My eyes are blind I cannot see,
Lies put forward to deceive me,
But if your were my true best friends,
You’d make sure this madness ends,
Ends with out another breath,
Ends without another death,
Brake the chains that tie my down,
Grab my hand, lift me off the ground,
But you’re not a friend you are a foe,
But blind old me would never now,
You’re the one, who left me here,
Now you’re far away you’re never near,
I’m rotting away, but you just don’t care,
Who knew this life could be unfair,
Love it lies, it’s pull you under,
And down beneath you begin to wonder,
Why did I feel love and they didn’t know?
Why did they stay so close and then let go?
Why am I like this? And why am I here?
Why do I live my life in constant fear?
What am I living for? Who is going to save me?
When I’m dead will they finally see?
What kind of bastard put me on earth?
And wreck my life for all it’s worth?
I rid the train, it’s at its finally stop,
I’ve climbed the tower, I’m at the top,
I’d say don’t try to stop me, But no one’s even here,
I’ve lived this life in tortured fear,
Scared of what this world might do,
Prayed these things wouldn’t come true,
But everything that happens is my fault,
So with your gun I’m put to a halt
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Re: It's all my fault
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:22:23 AM AEST
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another great write. Very well done
love always, dizza
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Re: It's all my fault
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:28:57 AM AEST
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very good write
pixie xx |
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Re: It's all my fault
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:43:50 AM AEST
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| Woah this is so vivid, it almost seems real, very well done, awesome write, keep it up. |
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Re: It's all my fault
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:44:56 PM AEST
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| Another excellent poem. Awesome. |
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