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Face of Truth
Contributed by
cj_ranson
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 04:00:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Truth has only just reached my mind
And now this world is being kind
Friends of old already gone
Friends One thinks they have
Are they really what they say
I ask myself every single day
I don't know what to think now
You tell me you care all the time
But I've never been sure
I can smile, but my soul is sore
What do I say
I really have had too pay
Coz of mistakes of the past
Life goes too fast
Lies only realised when one realises they're own lies
You can figure how some one thinks
And you can really work out the links
I see a great person in you
But not of my benefit
Man, this is so ****
I can't know anymore
Life was such a lift
Truth is a gift
As is life
I'll say goodbye
And I hope it's not a lie
Face of Truth
Copyright ©
cj_ranson
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2004-08-11 04:00:23]
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Re: Face of Truth
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 04:08:34 AM AEST
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| I still don't know whether I want to live in a world of complete lies or truths...still, I enjoyed this piece a lot, the face of truth can definitely be two-faced. |
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Re: Face of Truth
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:22:03 AM AEST
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Sean i'll always be there for you, you are one of my good friends dont forget that. If you ever need to talk i'll help you as much as i can
love always
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Re: Face of Truth
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by Row on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:51:59 AM AEST
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| ur gettin real good sean |
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Re: Face of Truth
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:08:30 AM AEST
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great work.
dizza |
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Re: Face of Truth
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by brew on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:38:41 AM AEST
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| Deep emotion........good write! |
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