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The Night I Cut Again
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:35:06 AM in AEST
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I feel throbing in my wrist, My shoulder too,
After doing something I longed to do.
It worked again, and took away all the pain
This isnt just some kind of game
When I cut its like after writing a poem
I feel empty, Emotionless
If I had something to pray to right now, I would
But theres nothing. I cant believe in a great spirit.
Though I want to so much, But I dont understand.
So whats left is to cut, and be alone,
And cry, Untill a part of me will die
Its easy to hide, and if questioned,
I couldnt find an excuse
You can tell i did it myself.
I start to feel guilty,
I hope no one knows
Now I'll be embarrassed if any of it shows
For right now everything is ok
Till it comes another day
Then I have to get out my new piece
I look at it as if its a grand feast
Because i know soon it will peirce my skin
And everthing dissapears within.
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Re: The Night I Cut Again
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:41:06 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but written well.
Search inside your heart and find the good there.
Choose life.
I'm so sorry your life seems so sad that u wonna die. No matter what u've donne God luvs u and all he wants is u 2 trust him.
Luv, huggs, faith, prayers,
emy |
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Re: The Night I Cut Again
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 05:32:38 AM AEST
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A,mber I am sorry to hear of your pain, you have a very good way of expression of your pain, I hope that it soon subsides for you
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Re: The Night I Cut Again
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:29:50 AM AEST
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So much pain, wreating in the sadness within your words.
I know that cutting is a way to ease the heartache, but please look into your heart there must be something to pull you up.
Your poetry is so beautiful, your words leave a powerful image, It is very expressive, allow your talent to write be a way of releasing the tension building within, let your desires flow within each letter for you have a beautiful mind, as your talent shows. |
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Re: The Night I Cut Again
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST
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i know how this feels...i know how bad it hurts....i hope u can overcome this...great write...excellent job
Lots of Love
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