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DEVIL DRIVE
Contributed by
notwhatitseems
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:42:05 PM in AEST
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BEFRIENDING THE DEVIL EVIL ?
HATING THE DEVIL GOOD ?
FRIENDS ARE GOOD TO HAVE
TO HATE IS EVIL
WHEN YOU DRIVE DON’T LET THE DEVIL RIDE
WHEN YOU DRIVE LET YOUR FRIENDS GET INSIDE
WHEN THE DEVIL GETS INSIDE DON’T LET HIM DRIVE
WHEN YOUR FRIENDS GET INSIDE LET THEM DRIVE
WHEN THE DEVIL DRIVES HE WILL THROW YOU OUTSIDE
WHEN YOUR FRIENDS DRIVE WILL THEY LET YOU RIDE ?
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Re: DEVIL DRIVE
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by tlhInganHom on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:13:55 AM AEST
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| Well..... TO be quite honest, I don't get it. |
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Re: DEVIL DRIVE
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:58:05 AM AEST
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you've over worked it. your point is just slaughtered that it has not meaning anymore. changing the word order in a stazna does not make it much different. just more cofusing. you need to work on this. make it a little more clear. good luck!
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