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Just Some Questions
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sunshinegirl
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
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Why do you only tell me the good things
Why do you leave out the bad
Why cant you talk to me
Why do you sound so scared
Why cant you hold my hand
When there are certian songs that we hear
Why cant you even look at me
When you start to fear
I always want to see you smile
Dont want to see you sad
I'm going out with my friends
I dont understand why your mad
Why do you give me an attitude
When i am not going to see you
Why do you assume the worst
But, oh God, if you only really knew
I know what you think
and is isnt really what I do
I may be out with other people
But all I think about is you
You make me feel bad
When I'm not there
Waiting for me to call you
At the phone you stare
Do you know that i miss you
When you are not around
Please believe your in my thoughts
No matter where I'm bound
The next day approches
And I'm excited because you're there
I try to make you smile
But you just sit there and stare
We hardly even talk
I dont know what to do
To make you understand
That I'm so happy to see you
Did I put it in your head
That I'm going to hurt you once more
Is that why your so scared
Is that why sometimes you shut the door
I'm just trying to make the time we spend
The great way that they usually are
Tell me, did I cut your heart so deep
That all thats left there is a scar?
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:20:08 PM AEST
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I'm sure he doesn't mean to think the worst... it's just that little demon on his right shoulder saying "what's she doing?"... if you are just going out with your friends... then he'll understand... and I'm sure that scar will heal right up in time!
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:26:06 PM AEST
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Wow! Well all I can say is this person sounds like they have deep feelings for you it's called LOVE!! When you have it you dont want to be away from that person not even a second,
I know you sometimes need space & need to get out with friends,but hes thinking you need space from HIM,so I guess it would be tough on either shoe!TRUST is very important in a relationship! Beautiful poem!Good Luck Christina |
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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"Why do you only tell me the good things
Why do you leave out the bad
Why cant you talk to me
Why do you sound so scared "
Because the only bad thing I've seen thus far, is the situation we're in, there's nothing else about us I don't love. I try not to talk about it for two reasons.
One: I promised you I wouldn't question or pressure you and when we talk about it you tend to think that's what I'm doing. And all I am is my promises to you.
Two: I don't talk about it, because I figure you're aware of it. We've been in this "place" for a long time now... the conversation deosn't seem to change.
Why do I sound so scared? Because I am. I'm scared to lose the only thing I've ever wanted. I'm also afraid I'm losing my strength. I'm scared of how much longer this will go on. Actually, the only thing I'm not afraid of is you.
"Why cant you hold my hand
When there are certian songs that we hear
Why cant you even look at me
When you start to fear"
I really don't know, I guess the same reason certain songs bring up bad memories for people.
Because I don't want you to see the pain I'm in and the eyes are the window to my soul. I've always been that way, I'll explain it further if you'd like.
"I always want to see you smile
Dont want to see you sad
I'm going out with my friends
I dont understand why your mad "
I know.
I know.
And it's not so much that I'm mad, but sometimes the past comes back to haunt me. It's not that you're going out with friends, it's that your friends don't accept and I'm tired of being "hidden" from them. And then there's always the other.
"Why do you give me an attitude
When i am not going to see you
Why do you assume the worst
But, oh God, if you only really knew"
I don't mean too, I just miss you.
And once again, because sometimes the past comes back to haunt me.
"I know what you think
and is isnt really what I do
I may be out with other people
But all I think about is you"
I know what you think I think and yes, occasionally I do. But that's only because of the situation.
"You make me feel bad
When I'm not there
Waiting for me to call you
At the phone you stare"
Don't feel bad.
Yes, I do like when you call, but I'm not sitting in the dark waiting for the phone to ring... usually.
"Do you know that i miss you
When you are not around
Please believe your in my thoughts
No matter where I'm bound "
Sometimes.
"The next day approches
And I'm excited because you're there
I try to make you smile
But you just sit there and stare"
Not always, but often enough I guess. It's not always easy to turn the depression or fear off, ya know. But you know I'm happy you're there... right?
"We hardly even talk
I dont know what to do
To make you understand
That I'm so happy to see you "
Because sometimes I'm affraid of what I might say. This goes back to the promise of not pressuring. You know I always say what's on my mind and not being able to is very hard for me. And I know you are... most of the time.
"Did I put it in your head
That I'm going to hurt you once more
Is that why your so scared
Is that why sometimes you shut the door"
That is a fear of mine. I don't think I can handle that again.
Yes sometimes.
And yes.
"I'm just trying to make the time we spend
The great way that they usually are
Tell me, did I cut your heart so deep
That all thats left there is a scar?"
I know you are. You always do.
Kind of, but you're the only one who can heal the wound.
I hope some of these answers are what you were looking for.
Great write by the way.
I love you swan, always have always will.
Curtis
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:15:35 PM AEST
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I forgot to answer a couple questions.
"What do you do when you want to get mad at someone because of the attitude they seem to have every once in a while, when you know its kind of your fault?"
You can get mad. I'll love you no less. Just tell me I'm being an a**hole and to give it a rest.
"What do you do when someone you care about doesnt believe you..."
I've been asking that question for awhile, I have no answer for ya.
I believe you though.
"...or doesnt want to even hear the real story?"
When you talk I listen. So, if you want to tell me something, I'm all ears.
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by sweetolbaby on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:05:48 AM AEST
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| Cool cool. I really like. I neva read a poem that just ask questions. |
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Re: Just Some Questions
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:46:25 AM AEST
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| Great write I really enjoyed it |
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