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Nightly Falls
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The constant throbbing strikes beat against my chest
Enduring the malaise stings strained within my despair
Tears have fallen that trickles below the comfort scene
Drooped mournfully with a single drop
Sucking the life away of an innocent soul
The thoughts revolved sores as it feeds away at tenderness
Sympathy lurks around my darkened room
Catching the mortal entity of myself
Sleepless nights induce disheartening remorse
With the final tear drop that lingers above my eyes
I descent into a cascade of wonder and
Drift asleep in the dreams which haunts me
Copyright ©
kittiekat
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2004-08-10 20:11:30]
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Re: Nightly Falls
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:24:42 PM AEST
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| You can say THAT again.--Mothy |
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Re: Nightly Falls
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:36:04 AM AEST
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So much sorrow, an excellent discriptive write, from beginning to end ,it showed me what I have trouble releasing...(tears),
Awesome poem keep it up. |
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