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need a new way.

Contributed by bttrflynajar on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 07:07:33 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



sitting on my bed, the night is finally over.
time to raise my chin.
and get through another day
i have to find a way
to deal with all my struggles.
my life i love and learn,
my life i want i yearn..
to be the best i can
instead of feelin
down like i cant
feel
the ground
everytime i screw up
my life comes crashin in
how is it that i manage
to screw up all the time
every day
frustrated
need a new way.
time to walk the steps
in the neverending hall
time to take these steps
no time to stop or stall
dont slip or trip
too late i know i will
i always do
through and through.
i always do
fate finds me
so then the hall goes dark, time to rest my head.
watch the night fly by
as cry and cry ..a river of tears i shed
crying out for wisdom
crying out for hope...
help me i say
help me today
i say it i scream it
i shout it
i leave it
i write it
i try and try all day
but its never good enough for me
why wont anyone bother to help me.




Copyright © bttrflynajar ... [ 2004-08-10 19:07:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: need a new way. (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:26:07 PM AEST
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I read this and it didn't kill me. So thanks. --the Moth


Re: need a new way. (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:49:07 PM AEST
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Esqusite InnerVision.
"the never ending hall"
that flow is so
beautiful.

The Wind.....




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