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WHEN IT'S OVER
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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What needs to be said is surely coming
and it just may kill me to cause you such pain-
But we're not the same-
Anymore-
Were we ever?
Does it really come as a surprise that it's over-
before it really even began-
I don't know MAN-
I mean-
I do love you-
In ways-
Some days-
When we're not at each other's throats-
I hope
this is the right decision for all concerned-
The right choice- or the only fair one
There is nothing wasted but time
and I'll cry...............for a while
But one day maybe, we'll smile..............
Because it's over...............and we can.
06/29/04
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PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-08-10 16:02:08]
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Re: WHEN IT'S OVER
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:17:26 PM AEST
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I hope you feel better soon. You have to do what you have to do. It might be hard for children if you have any. But it could also be easier because no one wants to grow up in a home where all there is is fighting. Good luck!
Katie |
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Re: WHEN IT'S OVER
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by shorty013 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:38:01 PM AEST
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| is it ever good? can it last? is that possible? im 20 years old with little hope of a real lasting relationships asking if its possible? i cry at the thought. |
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Re: WHEN IT'S OVER
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by priss on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:11:30 PM AEST
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| you will smile again, believe me |
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Re: WHEN IT'S OVER
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:00:45 PM AEST
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Becky-
Hi, it's me Kyle! I just wanted you to know that your a wonderful person with an awesome free-spirited soul. And as Priss said, you will smile again because you have friends and family that love you! Also, thanks for the gifts!!! I've already started using them.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!! |
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