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The Painter
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:44:46 PM in AEST
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my smile has been painted on
but the rain is falling
its washing off, my smile is gone
the Painter knows, he is calling
this isnt the right time or the right place
the Painter doesnt want a frown
he wants a smile on my face
but the rain keeps coming down
he knows the rain is my fault
he is extreamly agitated
he commands me to make the rain hault
I ruined the frown he mutated
he takes out the paints he needs
and draws his brush in an upward curl
into my mind he reads
he says "this lady has more to unfurl"
he paints a shimmer into each hazel eye
he was almost satisfied
all he needed now was to paint a love which would never die
the smile shows his love has caused all my pain to subside
there is one thing he didnt anticipate
again I let the rain fall
but I wanted the love to castrate
but instead I am a brokenhearted painting, hanging from the painters wall
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Re: The Painter
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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| i f*ckin love this one its got alot of potential nice use of words best one yet i rekon thank you xgripx |
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Re: The Painter
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by waos on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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| that's really really good. so imaginative, such a cool perspective. awesome job. |
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Re: The Painter
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by poetic_ire on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:05:15 PM AEST
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OMG! I LOVE this one! If I could favorite it, I would.
Very very very good, Ashlee. You should have your poetry published. |
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