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This love story has a sickening twist
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:44:29 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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I thought I would in your heart forever
I thought we never would be never
but i should have known right from the start
all you caused was a broken heart
every day I try my best
but I cant get rid of the iron hand clenched to my chest
I thought that I could be healed with time
but I realized I only dwelled on the loss of everything
that was mine
so I tried to find someone else to move on
but now that someone else is ignoring me and my virginity is gone
its getting hard to handle all of this stress
trying handle our breakup is one big mess
I was going to be over you this was my choice
but I realized that wasnt going to happen when I heard your voice
they say you learn from relationships that are long
but ours caused me to grow weak instead of strong
I amlying here on my bed as i weep
sobbing over these wounds that have cut so deep
but in this love story there is a sickening twist
in this ending I slit my wrist
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Re: This love story has a sickening twist
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by Stew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:48:52 PM AEST
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i hope you can get over this person, jake. and i really hope you didn't slit your wrist. we need all of the excellent and wonderful people we can get in this horrible world. and always remember there is a special person for you and everyone in this world. good luck!
love forever
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Re: This love story has a sickening twist
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 07:49:00 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all to well...i know how badly this hurts....i'm actually goin through the same exact thing right now....excellent job of expressing it.....awesome awesome right....FANTASTIC!!
Lots of Love
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Re: This love story has a sickening twist
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:06:02 PM AEST
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I felt a lot of emotion when I read this, and the last two lines sent chills down my spine.Im glad I read it.
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