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Never Letting Go
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:05:22 PM in AEST
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When I was born,
Jesus was there.
Holding my tiny hand
So tightly,
He whispered to me,
"I'll never let go."
And he never did.
I might have thought differently
Or never even thought it was true,
But he never let go.
14 years later,
After I shut him out
All I want is to hear him say,
"I'll never let go."
I close my eyes
And call him.
"God,
Are you there?
Are you still holding my hand?
I just want you to know....
I'll never let go."
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:12:32 PM AEST
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powerful jenna...
im speechless. i loved this. its filled with so much pain. :( great write girl. if you ever need to talk or anything then feel free to email me or anything :)
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:16:02 PM AEST
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Yes, God never lets go. And when we are weak he carries us. When nothing else works, God does.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:25:37 PM AEST
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this is wonderfully written, I have to admit that I don't normally read Religous poems , but I felt I just had to read this one :)
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:28:33 PM AEST
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Amen. He is always there. The constant in our worst and best times. Imagine life without Him? I don't want to.
Stitch |
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by Stew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:52:43 PM AEST
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this poem is powerful. but please read my poem Is There Really a God?
love forever
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by Hakiokusaken on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:23:19 PM AEST
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| very touching poem i reay liked it. one of the reasons i liked so much was its honesty and realism. Im glad I raed it. |
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Re: Never Letting Go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:09:15 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written - how well you depict the path to your last lines
I will never let go -
He is always with us- and even when we have let him go - are welcomed back, to learn we never left.
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