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The One in the Mirror
Contributed by
estelle_toh
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:47:25 AM in AEST
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Going through life
Shielding behind a colorful mask
Fixated with an artificial smile
Telling the world
There’s no need for romance
In your pathetic one person dance
Being so delusional
About what you really desire
Extinguishing all sparks before they become fire
Opening up your heart now
Is better late then never
Lest you regret it forever
Staring at me
Devoid of any expression
Are you listening to me even?
You!
Yes, you! The one in the mirror!
Copyright ©
estelle_toh
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2004-08-10 11:47:25]
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Re: The One in the Mirror
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:13:04 PM AEST
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wonderful self examination piece ! Straight up & to the point ! A pleasant read.
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Re: The One in the Mirror
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:21:18 PM AEST
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Great write,
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Re: The One in the Mirror
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by Stew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:35:42 PM AEST
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beautiful poem. keep it up!
love forever
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