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When You Miss Someone
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:42:03 AM in AEST
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When you really miss someone,
Being apart isn’t much fun,
All you want is to by their side,
Without them you want to run & hide.
You miss all the little things,
All the laughter & joy they bring,
The doe eyed looks & lop sided smiles,
All these things make life worthwhile.
Their loving voice still rings in your ears,
The voice that chases away all your fears,
You can still feel that last loving kiss,
These are just a few of the things you miss.
When you are away from your lover,
You miss the warmth of their cover,
The softness of their glowing skin,
That’s when being apart becomes a sin.
Absence makes the heart grow fonder,
As in your thoughts you do ponder,
& think of all the time you have shared,
Remembered the ways they shown they care.
I feel like this as it’s something I know
As our time apart ticks so very slow,
Even when we are having our own space,
If I shut my eyes I can see your smiling face.
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pixie
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by Estelle_Toh on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:02:19 PM AEST
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how true! :)
i've enjoyed ur write.. |
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by kammie on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:19:29 PM AEST
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it's sooo true !!
i am only thirteen but every thought i have is occupied with owen my boyfriend
im sick at the moment so i havent seen him for a few days and i really want to get up and go out to see him but im restricted to the bed !
it was a truely wonderful write pixie !!
you summed up how i feel just throw in dizzyness and pain and thats my feelings !
kammie xx |
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by Stew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:43:27 PM AEST
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i just love this poem, it is just so true. i have a man that i miss so much. i never get to see him. and probably never will.
love forever
stew |
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:28:43 PM AEST
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| I do love ...........thoughtful and nice writes....this one is.! love is beautiful! |
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 01:44:19 AM AEST
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| so true you're ...very nice write. venkat |
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Re: When You Miss Someone
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:38:58 AM AEST
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Your heartfelt sentiments are very well worded. What a lovely sweet endearing write. Im sure a lot can relate to this. Nice work Pixie.
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