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Please Forgive Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:39:14 AM in AEST
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Please can you forgive me?
I am really sorry I hope you can see,
I know my words were way out of line,
Really wish I could turn back the time.
I’d take back every last wrong I did,
Throw them in the bin & shut the lid,
Make sure you never knew hurt,
& that your heart never fell in the dirt.
From my mistakes I am beginning to learn
But through my veins I still feel the burn
I wish I could switch off my fiery rage,
I am moving nearer to my final stage.
I am trying my best & it is hard,
Trying to lock my anger in my back yard,
Just when I think I have got it beaten,
It comes back & another part of us is eaten.
Right now I just want to hold you,
Tell you of my love that is so true,
I want to promise you it won’t happen again,
But in my forecast forever lays the rain.
I will never ever refrain from trying,
To once & for all stop you from crying,
Our love is far, far too precious,
To be destroyed by something malicious.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-10 11:39:14]
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Re: Please Forgive Me
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:33:02 PM AEST
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A good poem pixie. I like the line " but in my forcast forever lays the rain " It shows a certain acceptance that, like rain, anger is an unavoidable facet of the human condition. It will never be gone, but we can learn to adapt. Work on ways to face it, much like we face fear.
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Re: Please Forgive Me
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:12:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful and caring write.......very emotional....Like it very much! |
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Re: Please Forgive Me
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:48:52 AM AEST
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Good job Pix, very sincere heartfelt plea of forgiveness.
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