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Beaten Down Again
Contributed by
Spell_Weaver
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:36:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A peaceful existence coming to a screeching halt,
hearing screams from the other side
of the looking glass...
Watching it crack with every slap and every threat.
Seeing the pain cross another's face
as you're trying to put her in her place,
but you know you're failing.
Flashing lights
blinding my sight, howls filling my ears
making me go deaf.
A bruised voice saying,
"Don't worry, everything will be fine."
But I know it's a lie.
Seeing the truth and hissing in disgust,
knowing all that I need to know,
while pulling the dagger out of my heart.
Thank you for beating my life.
Please make sure you clean up the blood.
and turn out the lights when you leave.
Copyright ©
Spell_Weaver
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2004-08-10 10:36:21]
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Re: Beaten Down Again
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by darkplaidbabe on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:56:30 AM AEST
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wow, this is so sad and angry. i can relate believe me, but i hope you're doing better now. beautiful poem.
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Re: Beaten Down Again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:36:55 AM AEST
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I am very glad to hear you are not there anymore. Sorry you had to go through that. I send you strength.
Rita |
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Re: Beaten Down Again
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:58:59 PM AEST
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| wow..what a wonderful write..it leaves me..once again holding my hand to my mouth..having a hard time breathing and praying..praying that you do more with your writing skills..I didn't and so I sit here..posting in a web site..pretending I'm doing something great.. while I wait on the next rejection letter to come in the mail.. |
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