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August 6th
Contributed by
betty
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:20:23 AM in AEST
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My last words
so carefully chosen
the touch of my lips
on your forehead
soft and forgotten
Refusal to accept
your last breath
in this life
faded beauty
meaning nothing
but a reunion
distant relatives
black clothes
purple roses
unable to surface
perpetual denial
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-08-10 04:20:23]
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Re: August 6th
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:56:06 AM AEST
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You have an entriguing way with words, I like it.
It captures the imagination.
Awesome poem, keep it up. |
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Re: August 6th
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:37:42 AM AEST
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| Saddness..........So sorry! Deep feelings, and deep write! |
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Re: August 6th
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by Maciej on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:51:56 PM AEST
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| multi layered a good read |
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