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Contributed by
tangle
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:40:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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listen to you
brave and untrue
think for a minute
seconds only equal hours
days unfold lies
you get mixed up
all your thinking surrounds
only you for you only
selfish and willing to bear
all burdens of others despair
self achievment accompianed by fame
walks down the street
unaware of others pain
fall in fall out
sorrow screams
regert hope dreams
describe the things you see
will the end
close visions of happy scenes
far away in another place
she stood alone in occupied space
she looked around and found
serenity of sleep
soon raptures unwanted commodities
fall in fall out
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tangle
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2004-08-10 02:40:08]
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Re: 00
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by oldernotwiser on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 07:28:57 AM AEST
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This is a fantastic line --
she stood alone in occupied space.
I'm sure I'm not the only one who can relate. |
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Re: 00
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:23:25 AM AEST
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Very interesting write with your own personal flair.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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