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my granchildren
Contributed by
karrie
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:14:07 AM in AEST
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how can people hurt you,
you'r so tiny, so little,
so pure and untouched,
so perfect in every way..
the love i feel for you
is unconditional,
so emotional, so lovely,
it's hard to put into words..
there's now 4 of you,
but you'r the newest,
the one that will be the heartbraker,
the one to touch the heartstrings..
i look at you and say,
be safe my sweet,
be happy in life be contented,
keep as pure as u are now..
may god and the adults
around my granchildren
keep you all safe,
happy and at peice with the world..
Copyright ©
karrie
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2004-08-10 02:14:07]
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Re: my granchildren
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by UnfallenTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:25:49 AM AEST
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| beautiful dedication |
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Re: my granchildren
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:21:34 AM AEST
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| sweet and beautiful...venkat |
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Re: my granchildren
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by Nursey275 on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:54:57 AM AEST
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Fantastic and really heartfelt..............They all love you too
Love Shell |
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Re: my granchildren
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by Janny on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:27:20 AM AEST
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| Touched me, very good. |
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Re: my granchildren
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:23:06 AM AEST
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Very nice karen, your love for them shines through like a shaft of sunlight into the shadows
"keep as pure as you are now "......well the world taints us all with life itself.Hope they see more good than bad
steve |
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