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Emerald Light
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:50:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This incandecsant emerald light
Fades into the foreground,
And somehow I'm reminded of you.
How your eyes trace the contour of my lips,
Like your sillohuette against the sky.
All I want is to stitch my hand to yours,
And rest my heart in your hands.
My blood seeps thru these pores,
Staining you with my love.
I can hear your voice
Echo inside my head,
Fading away into the dusk;
And the rythm of your form
Puts me to rest.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-08-10 01:50:06]
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Re: Emerald Light
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:56:25 AM AEST
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Paasionate and deep.
I liked these lines :
'All I want is to stitch my hand to yours,
And rest my heart in your hands.'
Good write.
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Re: Emerald Light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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I found this peaceful in conclusion, yet powerfully expressed;;
"How your eyes trace the contour of my lips,
Like your sillohuette against the sky."
Very enjoyable read.
Thanks for writing. |
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Re: Emerald Light
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:17:19 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this very much..Thank you for sharing it.....
Jenni |
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Re: Emerald Light
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:37:39 PM AEST
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| Beautiful opening line with emerald light such a nice color. Like Chemical Love you have good imagination using uncommon descriptions to show your love. Not sappy or sickly sweet like some peoms about love. It's a love poem that's intersting that many people could enjoy. |
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Re: Emerald Light
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:51:43 AM AEST
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a passionate write and very much filled with your emotions...I loved it a beautiful masterpiece...
How your eyes trace the contour of my lips,
Like your sillohuette against the sky.
All I want is to stitch my hand to yours,
And rest my heart in your hands.
Those lines strike me to be most beautiful I have ever read...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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