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The end of my life

Contributed by lonely_boy on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:49:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

there are so many ways to tell you how i feel
but there's only one way to show you that it's real
i take your hand as i get down on one knee
i pull out a box and ask you if you'l marry me
if all goes well my wish will come true
my wish is to spend the rest of my life with you
you covered your face as your the tears fell onto your dress
you hugged me and told me your answer was yes
i hug you and my body begins to shake
i never thought this feeling would be so great
we drive home with tears still streaming down
we're both so happy but we can't make a sound
we walk into the house to see a message was left
it was a man saying you are one he'll never forget
as my body tightens up i run out the door
i'm crying hysterically as i fall to the floor
you try to talk to me but i just push you away
i've given up on caring about what you have to say
i was so good to you, didn't that matter
i guess not because it's my whole life you've shattered
i get up and drive off to a place far from her
a place where a morbid death i will endure
i arrive at an abandoned factory where i get my gun
i take out all the bullets but leave just one
i raise the gun and push it to my head
i've decided that i'd be happier if i were dead
my hand starts to shake from all of my fear
i really wish that you were here
i regain control of myself and i pull the trigger
my soul lifts to the sky as the puddle of blood gets bigger
a few days later my story was on the news
who ever thought that such a positive man this world would lose

Copyright © lonely_boy ... [ 2004-08-10 00:49:02]
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Re: The end of my life (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:27:47 AM AEST
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good write.. this is very emotional and i can feel it as if it was my own write. Welldone
love always
corrupted minds

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