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Maybe i am not, (I am everything he cant be part 2)
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:34:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wonder what it is i can't see,
Because still you dont believe that i can be more than he,
Saying his everything you've dreamed,
Trust me.. it's not what it seems.
You've told me before that you have your doubts,
Are you sure what he is about?
Sounds like your not so sure...
I guess you have not heard...
I do recall you once saying you did not love him,
Saying you just wanted him just as a friend,
But also i remember you saying that you couldn't help to look into his eyes,
Wanted that one last kiss that would say goodbye.
I'll give ANYTHING just for that last kiss,
D*** he has no idea what he just missed,
Tell me why when your lips touched his,
He did not even want to have that simple kiss.
That guy has no idea what he has,
D*** this world when it comes to my demise,
In a way i feel as if i failed,
Wish i could lock my feelings and put them into a cell.
Maybe i should give up?,
Because everytime i talk to you.. your words cut.
Deep down i know she knows how i feel,
When time flies, it starts to kill.
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
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2004-08-10 00:34:12]
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Re: Maybe i am not, (I am everything he cant be part 2)
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:24:27 PM AEST
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I loved this one just as much as the first! You didn't tell me you were making a second one! This was awesome. And if it's something that you're really dealing with, I'm sorry. I wish you the best of luck!
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Re: Maybe i am not, (I am everything he cant be part 2)
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:19:57 AM AEST
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thisis as good as the first one...excellent job
Lots of Love
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