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-a criptic letter never sent-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:51:54 PM in AEST
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words flow as i speak in tounges my subconious takes dictation my eyes are wandering and she'll never know a robbery's in progress i drop not so subtle hints like flies playing the part of the fool can be tiresome give it a rest cos' the silence is deafening sleepless nights left to dreams can't tell the truth in time to beat the rational voice when he's plagued with indecision and a fever for rejection
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Re: -a criptic letter never sent-
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:12:31 AM AEST
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| so far you are the only person whos poetry i truly love on this site. the way you write is so dramatic, no gammatical BS to get in the way. Much respect!!! thanks for being different and strange |
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Re: -a criptic letter never sent-
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:28:02 AM AEST
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Convoluted and streaming. I'm not sure if I like it - I tried something akin to this before, but felt it wasn't effective enough.
Hope you like it, though, because that's what counts.
Keep writing. |
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Re: -a criptic letter never sent-
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by creed on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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| ...well..if only I'd read that before. |
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