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Silent Tears.
Contributed by
Dusty
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 06:17:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If I were to cry would my tears reach you where you are?
You're close enough to touch, yet you seem so very far,
I can feel your gaze upon me when I turn my eyes away,
I can hear the words you only wish that you could say,
Yet, I'm stuck immoblie watching your inner fight,
Won't you please be truthful, forget the wrong and right,
Your silence is killing me slowly, though outwardly I smile,
I laugh and joke and play, but I'm aching all the while,
If you would just let go, and trust in me your fears,
I wouldn't have to fake happiness, while crying silent tears.
Copyright ©
Dusty
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2004-08-09 18:17:59]
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Re: Silent Tears.
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by Quiet_Waters on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 06:25:28 PM AEST
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Well written with great emotion. Nicely done.
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Re: Silent Tears.
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:19:36 PM AEST
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Excellent write....sad and meaningful...good job
Lots of Love
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Re: Silent Tears.
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:13:11 PM AEST
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so sad but yet written really well great job.
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Re: Silent Tears.
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:21:35 PM AEST
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So sad and forlorn......I could hear your troubled heart full of emotion! Just be very patient.......it takes some that have been so hurt before.........a long long time to adore!
Beautifully written
Poetic hugs
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