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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
Fwog
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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With haunted face now so forlorn
She stands there in the early morn,
Aged fourteen, so young so slim
Dark brooding eyes and ebony skin.
I say, "I've searched for you for days
She replies through a drug filled haze,
"I'm here now Dal, full on, alive"
"I know the street I will survive."
We sit and talk I share her dreams
Of how once clean, her life will be
Filled with love,with joy, with hope
No more the need to seek out dope.
Then in her voice a change of tone
"Is there a God or are we alone,
"I've been so filled with misery"
"If there's a God, He can't find me."
"Promise me you won't deceive me
"Don't grow old and please don't leave me,"
"A fallen angel I may be"
"But I'll break through just wait and see."
"Dal I've gotta take off now"
Shout me a "Macca's, I need some chow,"
Then she walked out of my sight
Another child lost to the night.
One morn a knock upon my door
The policeman said, "Come to the morgue"
"We found her in a dumpste bin"
She'd overdosed on heroin...
copyright (c) Dallas R Weller
Fwog
Copyright ©
Fwog
... [
2002-10-31 05:00:00]
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:02:50 AM AEST
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| how sad, though a beautifully written write, take care, |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by stephy on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:14:42 AM AEST
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| wow... how sad... heartwrenching... i really like the write. it breaks my heart. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:17:48 AM AEST
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| O M G! I totally feel for you this was so beautiful & so sad! That has to be tough! God bless! Christina |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:25:46 AM AEST
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This is so sad
It must be so hard for you
to face these kids each
day and grow attached to
them, and then to lose one
so painfully like this
My heart goes out to you
and these kids
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:44:51 AM AEST
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it is sad that there are so many street kids out there that have been abused in some way or another so they choose the streets as their homes and drugs as there source of pain killr to forget where they are at right now... but remember Dallas if you can save just one and get him/her on the straight and narrow then it makes your job worth while and i know you are striving to do this with everyone of these kids that you see every day.
great write
love, peace and happy poetry |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 06:15:11 AM AEST
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Hi Dallas..This is so sad...and I can imagine how you feel. You come to love these kids as tho they were your own..and losing one is every bit as painful... Great write... Hoping to hear from you soon...
Jenni |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by lil_Jewel on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:01:51 AM AEST
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| this was a really beautiful poem. But it was so sad. The girl reminds me of me. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:22:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful ... emotional ... you've been to hell and back in your own life, and yet you are there for these kids ... and sometimes you lose them - it must be very heartrending. I admire you.
Poetry must surely be a great escape for you.
Wonderful poem.
DreamWeaver |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by horseluver on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:52:44 AM AEST
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| Really emotional poem for me -my brother has relapsed several times in the last 10 years to heroin ~ I know he is trying to beat it but it's such a powerful drug...-I wish she could have made it-but atleast she is no longer suffering. Very well written-thanks for sharing-and another thanks for trying to help street kids-they may have made some bad decisions-but they need help and support from people like you to turn their lives around....I just wish they could all be saved but life on the streets kills.... XXOO ~ Jess |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Roshie on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:50:42 AM AEST
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| *cries* This poem is so beautiful, we have so many cases like this where I live, but there is no one for them here, I appreciate what you are doing. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:40:17 PM AEST
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| Tragic and sad.... It's a shame that this has to reflect so many. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:17:23 AM AEST
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WOW
I was told to look you up and boy you certainly do not disappoint.
Luv your writing
Madison |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:46:58 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. Unfortunate that stories like this even exist. "If there's a God, He can't find me." - probably the strongest line I have read on this site. Take care. |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:27:29 AM AEST
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| that is so very sad. I am so sorry. You wrot about it very well |
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