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GETTING RID OF YOU
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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so this is how it begins
you reel me in and hurt me again
is it my pain you seek
is this your technique
lift me into the sun filled sky then drop me in a state to cry
I’ve had enough of your foolish games,
all your sweet talk causes pain
I thought what we had was true
I even let myself trust you
Now I see through your discuss
You’re evil plots and your lies
All your prying
All my crying
Inside I am dying
But through all the sleepless nights
I realized what was right
Know I now what I should do
I need to get rid of you
Copyright ©
alyssakoren_03
... [
2004-08-09 16:06:11]
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Re: GETTING RID OF YOU
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:10:04 PM AEST
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| I thought it was good, and since I've got this thing going on with a guy I can relate to it. I think you've got talent and the more you write the more it'll develop. Good job. |
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Re: GETTING RID OF YOU
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:54:30 PM AEST
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I vote that you have alot of talent... the spelling mistakes cut away from the poem, but it was a great poem. Hands down.
Jaime |
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Re: GETTING RID OF YOU
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by highly_flammable on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:14:43 PM AEST
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| this is one of my fave poems you wrote. its written very well with words that really set the scene. i lovee it! |
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