|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Letting go
Contributed by
becca_bruce2000
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
why do you hurt me keep me hanging on
to something that has so long been gone
you tell me that you love me but that is not the
truth
I feel my heart dying at it's ever so young youth
you tell me that you'll come back ...come back one day
but I know that your heart no longer longs to stay
I try to hold on to all those precious memories I try to
hold on but you are so out of reach
now my love is fading off into the night
there is no longer any light you have been gone
gone to long and now heart is learning how to move on
why do you hurt me.. keep me hanging on
to something that has so long been gone
you tell me that you need me but is not the
truth
now I feel I'm dying in my ever so young youth
you made a promise to God and me and now you found a
new love oh how can that be you tell me that she is perfect
in each and every way you tell me that you'll come back come back one day
now there is no need of crying no need to face the day for I know
you will not come back to me one day
now I will face up to all the pain even though I know that my heart will heal one day
I fear the long road ahead of me and the things that I have yet to feel
now I no longer dream of your sweet.. sweet face, my dreams are filled with pain,
my heart is filled with rage you left me all alone in this god forsaken place
with broken promises but that is okay for I know you will not come back
come back to me one day
Copyright ©
becca_bruce2000
... [
2004-08-09 15:46:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Letting go
(User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:03:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very nice, i read this because i have a poem of the same name. But this is very good. I believe it is about a divorce? Promise to God and me... Divorce is rough, moving on from love is hard, good luck.
Poet |
|
|
Re: Letting go
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:22:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good write.........thanks for letting all the bottle emotions flow |
|
|
Re: Letting go
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:09:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| great write. =] keep up the good work. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
