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One Way Miror
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:42:43 PM in AEST
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There is just no way to tell
It is impossible to count
The pieces I have broken into
When I came crashing down
I know you are looking
At the shattered parts of me
I know because I become
A thousand faces incomplete
All of them hating me
With their stares killing me
Afraid of what they see
The same way they were
When you put your hands on me
And through me to the ground
The real you is real
It loves and it feels
More than what you do
Its on the other side of me
I has seen you and
It’s coming around
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Re: One Way Miror
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by poet_of_anger on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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Very nice thinking. very well written, i liked it.
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Re: One Way Miror
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:00:38 PM AEST
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A very good write, a good read.
" ... the real you .... has seen you and it's comin around. " That is kool, deep, and thought provoking. Write On !!!
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Re: One Way Miror
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:11:08 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: One Way Miror
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:38:51 PM AEST
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| Great poem. it took a couple of reads to understand it but once i got it I thought it was cool. |
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