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Your not my friend
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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In between here and there
I don't know were I've been
I've seen and done so many things
And still I'm clueless in the end
I hate were I'm at.
I hate were I'm going
In the end I just want to die.
I don't understand all the *
And why all these * have to lie
Can't you just be honest?
Stop going behind my back!
If you hate me tell me!
Don't lie about it!
And * stop pretending to be my friend.
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Re: Your not my friend
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by AdamChantell on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 08:00:25 PM AEST
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| i feel the EXACT same way... friends that are only friends when they need or want someting from you. and when they get what they want or need, you do not exist anymore. i wrote something like this but i can't post it yet because there is a limit of 3 a day :) GREAT write by the way. |
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Re: Your not my friend
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:39:46 PM AEST
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I can relate I liked this write a beautiful pice...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Your not my friend
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by MariusSurleac on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 05:17:38 AM AEST
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this is an interesting poem and has a nice flow if we talk about the idea. The minus of this poem is the repetition of "I" in such a small place - this rejects the reader.
Nice!
Cheers,
Marius |
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